FP Rough Edit (*FEEDBACK*)

 

FEEDBACK - NEEDS TO WORK ON

T. Bianca

• Nice Establishing shots.
• Setting the scene needs some attention.
• Credits - in-between shots.
• Music change gears at certain point.
• Effect for Flashback.

Brianna

• Nice establishing shots :)
• I like the scream being overlapped with the cut to black - however, the scream needs work.
• Could be longer.
• Nice music to set the tone/establish the setting.