PT2 Rough Edit (*FEEDBACK*)

FEEDBACK - NEEDS TO WORK ON

T. Bianca

• Titles - maybe have them fade on and off
• needs dialogue
• Needs something more sound - wise for end sequence
• At the end don't show anything and just have the scream.

Porcia

•  Add effects for sound of onion

Brianna

• sound effects (Ding sound when the phone goes off)
                        (For the Onions frying in the pan)
                        (Onion getting chopped up)