Overall, your effort in your CCR has improved from your last one. Still aim for detail and not just using words but really looking at what information is needed to really answer the questions in an informed way. Well done in using blog tools, just make sure fonts are standardised and nice and big/ clear enough to read easily. Q1 - you started off answering Q2 in Q1 slideshow. Please fix this, it's just confusing. - some good conventions that you replicated in your film opening but your reflection isn't detailed enough. There are so many thriller conventions and codes that you used, that you didn't mention. Technical codes / conventions like shot types/ editing style etc and then narrative codes / conventions pertaining to how you told the story.
Q2 - Your notes on your target audience, about what they enjoy doesn't have anything to do with them being interested in your film. Maybe to do with distribution in a broader sense of how your audience may access your film but nothing that demonstrates a real understanding of how the process of distribution works.
Q3 & 4 - they have enough information, just need to include info from all production phases, from pre-production / production and post-production.
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Overall, your effort in your CCR has improved from your last one. Still aim for detail and not just using words but really looking at what information is needed to really answer the questions in an informed way.
Well done in using blog tools, just make sure fonts are standardised and nice and big/ clear enough to read easily.
Q1
- you started off answering Q2 in Q1 slideshow. Please fix this, it's just confusing.
- some good conventions that you replicated in your film opening but your reflection isn't detailed enough. There are so many thriller conventions and codes that you used, that you didn't mention. Technical codes / conventions like shot types/ editing style etc and then narrative codes / conventions pertaining to how you told the story.
Q2
- Your notes on your target audience, about what they enjoy doesn't have anything to do with them being interested in your film. Maybe to do with distribution in a broader sense of how your audience may access your film but nothing that demonstrates a real understanding of how the process of distribution works.
Q3 & 4 - they have enough information, just need to include info from all production phases, from pre-production / production and post-production.