I'm really disappointed that you didn't take the opportunity I gave you, to really have good go at fixing this up.
Overall Score: 9/20
Q1 - only answers part of the question. You don't talk about representation at all or show any sort of understanding about representation of people groups/ stereotypes etc. The codes and conventions mentioned are valid but there should be around 10 + of these in every technical area (lighting / editing techniques used etc)
Q2 - The question is all about how you will distribute this as a real media text. You haven't answered that question at all.
Q3 - How have your production skills improved - you need to answer this question directly, too. You have a few good points here but relating them back to what actual production skills you've learnt, is crucial. What part did you play in each of your pre-production and production roles from your team? You don't even list them. What did you learn to do? details, pictures, explanations - lots more actual info needed.
Hi Kevin
ReplyDeleteI'm really disappointed that you didn't take the opportunity I gave you, to really have good go at fixing this up.
Overall Score: 9/20
Q1 - only answers part of the question. You don't talk about representation at all or show any sort of understanding about representation of people groups/ stereotypes etc. The codes and conventions mentioned are valid but there should be around 10 + of these in every technical area (lighting / editing techniques used etc)
Q2 - The question is all about how you will distribute this as a real media text. You haven't answered that question at all.
Q3 - How have your production skills improved - you need to answer this question directly, too. You have a few good points here but relating them back to what actual production skills you've learnt, is crucial. What part did you play in each of your pre-production and production roles from your team? You don't even list them. What did you learn to do? details, pictures, explanations - lots more actual info needed.
Q4 - links don't work